chickenmilk April 1, 2011 at 4:19pm
so which is it, pick-up or pickup?
"pull over a pick-up truck"
"A LCPD officer saw the pickup"
"Police were responded"
were responded? what the heck does that mean?
"to a hom burglary"
I don't know about you but I live in a home, not a hom.
"The identity of the detained suspect is has not been released."
I is has unsure about just what the heck you are doing writing for a news outlet.